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Spot

cat hair tickles my nose
this shows
i have a fat cat, named Spot
he sheds a lot
cat hair
always in my chair
makes me sneeze
"Spot, stop shedding please"

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  • Christina-is-crazy
    June 17, 2008

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    Wow this is a good poem, its better them most 8 year old i know can write, haha, keep writing, becasue one day i think you'll be really great at it.


  • gmmike
    May 20, 2008
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    Nice job and keep on writing good poems


  • Pandorea
    May 13, 2008
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    hahaha cute. i know what those cats can be like *rolls eyes*.

    thanks for entering.


  • pop123
    March 28, 2008
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    Nice poem,keep writing!
    Thanks for entering my contest!


  • wolfpuppy
    March 19, 2008
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    ya

    great job great poeit just like ur mom keep writeing buddy


  • Kassandra Nyktos
    March 19, 2008
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    awww thats so cute! good job!

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    March 19, 2008
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    Well done. Thanks for entering.
    Good luck.
    Brian


  • peridotPixi
    March 19, 2008
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    nathan i love your poem, good luck in the contest and keep writing, -your mom

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