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Keep The Faith

Demonic figures consume
the night,
hiding in the dark
and moving
in the shadows.


Horrific howls screech 
across the land,
as agony rips
through the blackness;

ears echo,
a frightened children screams
as swords clash
in a fierce battle.


Spreading like a wild fire
out of control,
flames rage
engulfing all
in it's path.


The damned lay
batter,
bruised and bleeding
as the bravely innocent 
wear crimson tears dried
upon pale flesh;
 
half dead, half alive...

Final drops
of faith spill,
begging for mercy
while reaching out
for forgiveness.


Sad eyes grow empty
and close
to the horror,
but reawaken
to angelic glory;

prayers
were answered
and forgiveness granted,

for their faith
had not gone
unseen.



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  • Catatonia gold member
    May 9
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    Darkness creeps

    I am not sure as to it being lovely so to speak, but it was pure, and dark... and written so well that you are transported to another realm, a world maybe, I enjoy those who can write and make you be there, excellent! I will have to venture further... write on poet!

  • this is really good, i like it.

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  • This is very lovely in my oppinin. Funny someone could say that about something so dark. However the image you create is perfect. It's well spoken and vivid