I linger here alone
Lost among this crowd
I look for you and scream
But my words are lost within the sound
Even though I’m here
No one seems to care
I feel my body begin to crumble
As I am swept up in the air.
Who will find me
And repair my broken soul
Do you not care that
I am not even whole?
I scream into the night
And I shatter the cracked mirror
As I look forward I
Watch myself disappear.
How did it come down
To this agony and rage
Am I so insignificant that
You ripped me from our story’s page
I dare you to forget me
And look into the dark
But I will be there watching you
With this shattered broken heart.
Will anyone find me
Who will find my soul
Is there naught that I can do
The heart’s death has taken it’s toll…
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im not good at comments so all i have to say it I LOVE IT!!!
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Thank you so much for looking at my poetry and commenting, I really appreciate it.
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awsome
wow.... great imagery.... very powerful and your questions and haunting! and there is ALWAYS someone there who cares... even if you don't c them... i care.... a poet this great deserves to be cared about
keep it up!!!
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Thank you so much! It makes me happy to get feed back like this. Was the poem to repetitive or was it half way decent?
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