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Santa Saves Easter

twas the week before Easter
no noise in the workshop
just sitting down with a cup of cold pop
what to my old ears did I hear
it was a phone call,
kind of early in the year
answered the phone wondering
who could it be
to my surprise
it was the Easter Bunny
so I settled down my chair
why did he call me
“I am loosing my hair”
he said with spite
I can’t go out Easter eve night
“Santa you must help me with this,
Please come on you do it for Christmas”
I made a deal with that bunny
I will only do it,
If you pay me lots of money
The next week Easter came
To the children Easter was the same
Hiding eggs and filling baskets
this year you have a lot more
things to thank Santa for

Author notes

Option 2: rewrite a christmas song
Bah Humbug"

twas the night before christmas...

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  • mystic-angel
    December 7, 2008
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    Sweet! Thanks for your entry and good luck.


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    December 3, 2008

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    Very interesting twisted tale you have here. Congrats on the silver trophy and thank you for following the rules.

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**


  • daviscth
    December 2, 2008

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    LOL. This is adorable and I can see why it has won a silver trophey. Thank you for sharing in my contest.


  • Cat10
    June 12, 2008

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    thank you for entering! this is a very, very cute poem! I really liked it! it was very entertaining! you did a great job and good luck!


  • GypsyEyes
    June 2, 2008

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    hahaha this was cute and creative! love it! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    May 2, 2008

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    This was truely so funny and really very clever! Thank you for this lovely entry!!

    all the best! (and give my regards to Santa )


  • S a r a h 4 5
    March 25, 2008
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    haha good job!

    i like these types of poem
    they are really cool!


  • tarcus
    March 25, 2008
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    pity about the capitalising and lack of punctuation,


  • Princess Peaches
    March 25, 2008
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    Very well done and good luck in the contest
    <3 Princess Peaches


  • TizMoi
    March 22, 2008
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    Very funny. Good luck in the contest, lol.

  • chet
    March 20, 2008
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    that funny. do more please


  • UnManned4Ever
    March 20, 2008

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    This is sooo cute!! I loved it!! I really think it is one of your best!! Great! Great! Job!! I want more!!

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