frigid tomb
black atmosphere
dance of death-
the soul consumed
Author notes
prompt-Mortuary
A contest entry
- Prompt Inspired quickie by Tattboyspet.
475 points, ended March 20, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Interesting form that I have not seen from you before. Very dark too. Best of luck in the contest.
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The prompt was Mortuary and only 10 words, may not be my usual thing, but I thought I'd try something different.
I enjoy things off the norm sometimes lol Thank you for your comment sir. 
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'frigid tomb' - very descriptive
actually, the entire one was really good - thank you for your entry
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Thank you so much for your comment, and HM in your contest. I enjoyed doing this one.
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Some great imagery within your words. Very nicely written, good luck in the contest
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I appreciate your kind comment, coming from someone of your talent, I am touched. My thanks to you.
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