Drowning in tears...
that fell to the ground.
My cries left unheard, not making a sound...
And as I lie here in so much pain...
I can only find one person to blame.
why did I ever let you in?
This life is just a battle that I cant win...
So with this knife, fuck this life...
And you'll never have to worry again....
About me taking you down in the end.
I wanted a life that I could call my own...
My tears and pain concealed behind a phone.
I can no longer ask myslef why,
Crying over a person that had to lie.
You held my heart in your hands... and let it drop upon the sand.
Now all that's left are the memories...
Twisted and torn.
Held close to me...
One last try, one last breath... i slowly fall to my death.
A contest entry
- Contest! come and join!!!! by I-Feel-weightless.
360 points, ended May 1, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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That is incrediable. It brought tears to my eyes, I just love the emotion you put into it. The rhymes were written well and it's just fantastic. I can totally relate to it too. Good job.
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wow.... this is sad! i almost started to cry! good write are you ok know?
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wow this poem is strong if you dontwin the contest someone is crazy
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Whoa thats really good!
Good luck on the contest
Great write!
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bravo!!!!
you better let her win...or I kill you
. jk jk. But seriously!!!!! i vote for her!!!!!!!!
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