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[ Deception is sitting across the table from us ]

Deception is sitting across the table from us
Sitting there, watching creating no fuss
Stalking us, recording our moves
Acting like it disapproves

Thinking of itself, so commanding
Acting as if it is so outstanding
Like it is gracing us with its existence
According to it, we need much assistance

But what does it know, all it does is sit
It never joins in, or breaks up a fit
I decieves us, acting like it cares
Reading over its questionnaires

But it's just wasting our time
Deception- an idiotic mime

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  • carmel apple
    March 25, 2008
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    Paragraph four line three should say It?? instead of I.
    But very good. Speaks truth!!!!