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Revelation

Divine revelation read and fed
Down to earth from heavens above
The vast are lighten away from dark
And rest are upon us to choose
These giants bow and rivers pray
The brown soon be lavished in lime
As the nature play

We rapture we destroy and re frame
And claim for the title of a creator
How more ignorant can we be?

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  • Roaddog Wolf
    March 29, 2008

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    not much, that is pretty ignorant which man seems to excel in being Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest