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Yamaraja

Yamaduttas come circling feverishly.
All devotees escape the hangman's noose.

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hindu demigod of death=YAMARAJA
Soldiers for death=yamaduttas
henceforth=the holding tank for death is a
"MORTUARY"

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  • Sarah957
    March 19, 2008

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    Yamaraja... how did you find this? Very interesting!
    How do the devotees escape the hangmans noose? They escape death by worshiping him somehow?


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 19, 2008

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    Very unique and interesting, good take on the word, creative indeed. Superbly done, good luck in the contest


  • Tattboyspet
    March 19, 2008

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    I apologize if I offend you, but please could you put something in your AN to try and explain this one ...