Cold steel chambers,
shattering the illusions
of rose tinted life.
Author notes
Prompt; Mortuary (hehe I love this word to)
A contest entry
- Prompt Inspired quickie by Tattboyspet.
475 points, ended March 20, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 100 Short Prewrites by Kari.
450 points, ended March 31, 2008, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I really like this one a lot..outstanding job in this piece. Thanks and the best of luck
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wow well said and congrats on trophy
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You have way too much fun
Keep inspiring me milady. Someday, I'll match the wonderful prose you do. Just not today. Today, I'll read once again the consistent constancy of your work. You have mastery over words. Well done, poetess
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Ahhh.. brilliant! Got a shiver down my spine from this... brrrr.... mortuary's freak me out!
Great take hun
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the morgue makes me cold, well done with this xx
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ooohhhh me likey =)
this is awesome
great write and good luck in the contest!
take care
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Wonderful write.....great take on the prompt...wish you luck in your contest
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You have done the prompt justice, very well written indeed. All the luck with the contest.
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Enlightening succinct sibbilations. Love your poetry!
Ken
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I love this piece, it is wonderfully penned and expresses the prompt perfectly! Good luck!
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Wow that is dark and very descriptive. Great job!
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cool
love the words you have chosen
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Nicely Done HEHE good luck
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oh my! wonderfully put! Enjoyed this one thoroughly - thank you for your entry
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