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Scattered Souls

           


            Darken shadows
           
            Silent breath
             
              Grieving hearts
             
              Scented smells
               
                Scattered Souls

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Word prompt-Mortuary

A contest entry

How does this make you feel and can you relate to this

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  • Deceits Tears silver member
    March 19, 2008
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    Sad yet lovely michele Well done


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    March 19, 2008
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    Very descriptive my friend, good job with the prompt, best of luck!
    Linda


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 19, 2008
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    I like this one, beautifully put yet somewhat sad. All the best in the contest with it


  • Tattboyspet
    March 19, 2008

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    This gave me a sense of loss and yet you have painted it almost beautifully
    thank you for your entry