I could see the flowers smiling
when I told you of my love
I could hear the gentle coo-ing
Of that watching morning dove
Sunlight bouncing all around
reflecting the drops of dew
As a tear drop started falling
from my eyes so filled with you
The moment truly captured
in my soul and in my heart
That Love we shared together
right from the very start
I often see that moment
from which our "Heaven" grew
When I saw those flowers smiling
When I said that "I Love You"
Mr. Doug
A contest entry
- First Love by BandGeek101.
475 points, ended April 4, 2008, 26 entries
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400 points, ended March 16, 2009, 32 entries
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Comments
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I agree with Band Geek 101 your imagery in this poem was rather creative. Teardrop is one whole word. I saw no option.
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wow this was great the way you used imagery i loved it i loved how the flowers were personified it was really creative and thoughtful
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