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odious funeral

yowling dreams

        echo,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,vain

starveling souls
       
      b
        l
          e
            e
              d
                i
                  n
                    g,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,pain

boneyard within

Author notes

prompt: MORTUARY



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  • Sarah957
    March 20, 2008
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    That gave me chills! Eek! Thats freaky


  • luna-midnight gold member
    March 19, 2008

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    this is really cool, intresting way fo writting, nice take on the pormpt!
    nice write and goo luck!
    take care
    stephanie =)


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 19, 2008

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    Wow very nicely written, a fab take on the prompt. Superbly penned, best of luck with it


  • Tattboyspet
    March 19, 2008

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    wonderful entry - enjoyed this one thoroughly - the format added to the entire write - well done and thank you for your entry


    • psychokid
      March 19, 2008

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      thank u for this inspiring word, u know, i never noticed that one word could take u so far in ur mind,
      wish u to make more contests like this
      ciao

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