Japanese children
fly bright coloured kites over
a bushy hillside.
As kite-strings break in the wind
fallen kites blossom bushes.
A contest entry
- Japanese Culture Tribute. by IorganicInsight.
300 points, ended March 30, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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upbeat*
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i like this poem a lot.
very upveat and happy. [:


