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Blow hot----

Dead bodies
lying in cold chests.
Their souls blow hot.

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mortuary
word prompt

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  • RAWR-itsPurplePixie
    March 19, 2008
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    it's so POWERFUL! I hope that you do good in the contest!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 19, 2008
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    Nicely done...I like it. Good luck in the contest


  • Tattboyspet
    March 19, 2008

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    hmmmm ... simple and to the point, but I'm afraid I'm lost with the meaning of 'blow hot' ...