Tales whispered
speaking memories
leaving souls chained
asleep to death.
Author notes
10words.
prompt: MORTUARY
pic credit: unknown.
A contest entry
- Prompt Inspired quickie by Tattboyspet.
475 points, ended March 20, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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oooh this is really good, defidently trophy worthy. Asleep to death. Creepy!
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enjoyed this one ... the line "leaving souls chained" was unique
thank you for your entry
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So sad, i sure hope you don't feel like this, yet it's a good poem
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"asleep to death" = awesome
A lovely job.
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haha, yeah right, i know it's shit, i got home and am still sick and am so tired, but had this resvered..so had to do..lol
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