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"Psycho Pete killed by Dildos... Forever, in bliss, we are with him"



We gathered before the
newscript
weeping bitterly
for the typos.

Author notes

Propt: Mortuary.
Take: Obituary. Humour.
Ok?
Enjoi.

The Orbituary read:
"Psycho Pete killed by Dildos... Forever, in bliss, we are meant to be with you in pain."
meant to read:
"Macho Pete: killed by Phil Doss. Forever rest in bliss; may we meet with you again."

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Comments


  • Confuzzled1
    April 28, 2008
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    Lmao love the title....nice!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 19, 2008
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    a wicked take on the prompt..lol. Love the title all the best in the contest


  • Tattboyspet
    March 19, 2008

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    lol - enjoyed this light take on the prompt ... and me being the way I am about typos - well, I'll just leave it there shall I?
    - very creative - thank you for your entry