Pruning
the garden of eden -
was it
always
this easy?
Whip out the
required tools
and slash the problems
out of the was -
Snap the stems
destroy the roots
so the filth will remain
at bay.
No matter
the
consequences...
Author notes
Enjoable write. Enjoi the read.
Quote.
"They slit our throats
as soon as flowers" - or something.
A contest entry
- Quote Inspired. [40 words or Less] by Naridill.
450 points, ended March 24, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Enjoi!!
Comments
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What a title! You gripped this prompt well. The piece shows simple imagery but stark phrasing.
Thanks for entering,
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