Crimson drenched sky, left us entranced
As we formed rings and upward glanced,
Red on blue, left the sky enhanced
In joy we danced, in joy we danced.
All of us clad in silver white
Silk satin robes, dancing bright,
To the world of fantasy's night
We take our flight, we take our fight.
Before the first star shines on sky
To ecstacy's land we shall fly,
Joyous notes to the guests so high
Lets sing and sigh, lets sing and sigh..
A contest entry
- Monotetra Form by Seeking Peace.
1100 points, ended March 31, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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raspberry this was excellent! I loved the rhyme scheme! It made the poem read even better. It let each stanza stand out on its own and let the poem flow together so nicely. Making the poem even better yet I think! I so enjoyed this!
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for sure.....ur imagination is very powerful n great!!liked the poem....a v nice read...the form has been beautifully penned.
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I like it, the poem has a nice flow and it seems like you`ve put quite some thought and effort into it.
Good work, hope you win the contest
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