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Thank You All

Thank you all for being there

Thank you Daddy,
For staying with me
For not running away
For just being my daddy
I love you with all my heart
And I don't know where I would be with out you
You are the number one in my book
Even if you protected me from to much
Thank your Daddy,
From you little girl

Thank you Adam,
For getting in trouble
And bring us closer
For being my little brother
And always know that I hold you life in my hands
For listening when I have a problem
For stay with me while daddy went on vacation
Thank you Adam,
From your big sister

Thank you Aunt Wendi,
For getting me ready for prom
For telling me I'm pretty
When I feel ugly
For always being there for me
Even though you don't have to
You are the best aunt in the world
And I love you for that
Thank You Aunt Wendi,
From you adopted daughter

Thank you Uncle Donny,
For teaching me the ways of nascar
For cheering Mark Martin on when he had a bad season
You are the only one that stayed with him
Well except for me
If you hadn't have been there to teach me
I would get bored of nascar
Thank you Uncle Donny,
From you biggest nascar fan

Thank you Uncle Doc,
For taking my race car to the track
And not charging me a fourtune
Even when times were hard for you
For making sure my car ran smooth
And towing daddy's truck home after we broke it
You didn't have to do that
But you did
For making sure my car left the track in style
Thank you Uncle Doc,
From your little drag racer

Thank you Uncle Danny,
For reminding me of my mom
For telling me how much I remind you of her
You always know how to make me smile
When I get down about my mom
For telling my and Adam that we remind you of you two
Thank you Uncle Danny,
From you older sister's daughter

Thank you Chea,
For being the best cousin in the world
When we could have grow apart
You didn't let that happen
Even when we fight
We work hard to get back to friendship
Thank you Chea,
From you cousin To To

Thank you Kassie,
For being the worst sister in the world
You made me and Adam closer
And you missed out on a wonderful life
We both have awsome cars
And a wonderful dad
Thank you Kassie,
From you little sister

Thank you Mom,
If God had not taken you life on that day
I would not have the life I have
It would be so diffrent
And I would't know how helpful every one is
You made our family strong
And I know you would be proud
So thank you mom,
From the daughter you never really got to know


Thank you everyone,
You have made me who I am
And I couldn't be happier
I love each and everyone of you
For the love and lessons you have given me
You did what you did
And were never forced to love me
Thank you everone,
From Victoria Eve Bradley
The girl you helped grow into a woman

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  • Manoj Sanyal
    July 28, 2008
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    nice poem and well expressed.
    Best wishes and good luck,


  • DeathtoloveShade gold member
    April 15, 2008
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    I loved it

    good job keep it up


  • Sashaness
    March 22, 2008
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    Second stanza:
    third line
    "And bring us closer" *bringing
    Fifth line
    "And always know that I hold you life in my hands" *Always know that I hold *your* life in my hands*
    Seventh line
    *Staying*


    Very sweet poem! aww melted my heart! I loved it truly Well written well done.


  • Lioness
    March 20, 2008
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    Beautiful

    It was smother than your other poems. It had stanzas without feeling chopy. You did a great job.


  • honorable mention
    March 19, 2008
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    very nice. honesty. i like that in a poem. thanks for entering

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