Close your eyes.
Beyond space and time the light shines at its brightest.
Beyond space and time, your light shines at its brightest.
Now smile, for this dream is a good dream.
Shimmer.
Glimmer.
A touch of illumination.
Perfect.
The ocean waves tickle your toes.
Open your eyes.
Sunrise on a perfect morning.
Soft globe of orange lifting slowly in the southern sky.
The purple hue above giving way to tangerine light.
A kiss of warm, west bound winds settling in the snow covered evergreens not thirty feet away.
Sounds of gulls heard in the near distance.
An eagle calls for some attention,
And an owl sits perched, on a branch in the waves.
Barefoot. Soft white sand,
And glorious mountains just beyond the water.
A breath of heaven on a mid-winter morning,
With stars winking far to the north.
Close your eyes,
And relax to the calm sound of waves gently caressing the shore,
Open your eyes...
Now smile, and rest here for a while.
A contest entry
- Show me the impossible! by Keith Drew.
1800 points, ended March 20, 2008, 20 entries
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very awesome
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beautiful, dani! oh and fb is being stupid, so here is the sitch. easter my house at 1pm and we will have food and play games and watch movies, if you want to bring any of your movies go right ahead! whatever you want! oh im so excited!
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Beautiful.
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It made me think of this song I've been listening to a lot lately called "Vision of Heaven."
Although, yours is much more optimistic.
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Started off really well you were taking me to a place i had never been before.
If you had said three suns i would still be there now, but i came back to earth with a bump!
When you gave me gulls and owls and evergreens.
A place i imagine that you imagine yourself to be in.
Nothing wrong with that.
It sounds beautiful as is your poem.
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