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choices

Sick of the hurt
Fed up with the pain
I need to stand alone
and be proud
Proud of the woman I am
of who I see looking back at me
With a gentle heart and a caring spirit
I need to make choices
that are right for me
not for everyone else
Giving my heart to someone
who clearly doesn't want it
is something I have chosen to do
but that will change
I need to be strong for me
and stop living in a dream
I don't need to waste my time
or my tears any longer
I am ME
and I deserve happiness!!!!!!

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Written December 4th, 2003

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  • FadedtoBlack
    December 4, 2003
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    Hmm, that's how I feel at the moment. Hmm. Nice poem, very nice actually. Shows feelings perfectly. Keep writing

    ---[Faded-Ecstacy]---
    ANTIPINK


  • AC no1
    December 4, 2003
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    We all need to do this, very nice write i really liked it sorta powerful almost like you were giving this as a speech!


  • WhiteLilac
    December 4, 2003
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    WOW great write, it is truly beautiful and inspiring for all women. Thanx for sharing it. Keep it up!!