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Wayside Flowers

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 Photo: Queensland D.P.I.

 

Purple Morning Glory trumpets ‘hello’ from overhead.
I stop to look at the fluted bells floating past as I walk
for my heart, but my heart stops for an instant for them.

Hedges of Duranta, pale mauve petals and tiny berries
yellowed all over as if painted by pixies or elves
quicken my pulse and I stop again to ponder.

In this early, sub-tropical stroll, autumn inspired,
snow falls in showers of Himalayan Ash blossom,
cascades from bare head to shoes and walking trail.

Bridal bouqets of small leaf and large leaf privet
catch me by surprise, covering an old cow gate
beside a huge, light green Camphor Laurel tree.

Downwards, over a cliff-face, I see a prism flash.
Colors of wild Lantana clamber the escarpment.
Butterflies love its florets; they love butterflies.

Like a balloon filled with Helium, I bounce home.
Bubbly. Effusive. Lie down after a shower. Yes.
My heart is in the right place. That bliss of solitude

Wordsworth well knew, I know. My heart fills.
Those floral marvels on my farm-stroll walk
again, within. They and man have a special bond.

These are invasive weeds. Their crime, not beauty,
but breeding too well. Like our living and breeding,
they endanger the planet, or our part of it.

I am solitary and sad as a popped balloon.  

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    March 25, 2008
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    Tight twist at the end of this beauty. How wonderful the walk though, I was there, enjoying the fragrant beauty of the flowers.

    Your closing line is the bittersweet of it all. Absolutely enchanting and held tightly to the bliss of solitude.

    I am thoroughly enchanted with this verse.

    Well done poet. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela


  • Age of Rain
    March 21, 2008

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    Beautifully worded. Images flow from this piece with ease. I vividly picture this scene as if I were walking through it. This piece tells a tale and makes a statement all at once. Remarkably well written and best of luck in the contest!


  • Lady Altheia
    March 19, 2008

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    Nature is neurral I think. We have beautiful flowwers but ugly weeds. We have nice sunny days but harsh cold winters. You can't say one is Nature and not the other.

  • ecrivain01
    March 19, 2008

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    I suspect my reaction ...

    was not what you expected. I laughed. This was such a different ending than what I expected from the rest of this. Unfortunately, it's also all too true.


  • MargaretG
    March 19, 2008

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    Goodness, who would think that all this beauty has a dark side? Then again, each baby is a potential genius and a certain mouth to feed.
    Your studies in horticulture serve you well, and drive everyone else to the encyclopedia (a good thing!), and you remind me again how rich one is when one understands language that describes nuances.
    I enjoyed your line,
    "Butterflies love its florets; they love butterflies."
    There is harmony in this quiet conflict.
    Bliss is here, but not in isolation. Well done.

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