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I Have Traced

I have traced the crevices of her desires

in soft and steady satin stirring strokes,

to bear the flush of heart throbbing thoughts

where lips and words are music

writing a symphony of taunting theme.

 

But in the quiet tension

of night's brewing intimacy

we find our song with a touch's baton

love being our conductor.

 

If all our tomorrow were to cascade into oblivion

and every second bled of its joy,

my soul would still hold onto the lace of our embraces

until Heaven is where our breath was breathed.

 

For though life twists and snarls in sensation

and scores of thorns and tears breed in sunset,

they all pass into a hallow forgotten

because I have my angel's face to carry as my shield.

 

Together we cling to the stars burning within our caress,

let our passions be etched on affection's scroll

where it waves before dawn as a banner of our pure devotion,

being victory's pennant waved in ecstasy wind

against the battle we both fought,

alone and often,

with the minions of loneliness.

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  • Andarael
    March 20, 2008

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    This is just incredible! What imagery! What Passion! THIS is "giving me your heart". You took my breath away with this lovely poetry.


  • SchizoChic
    March 20, 2008
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    That was just beautiful and so full of imagery. Best of luck.


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    March 19, 2008

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    I admire your command of the English language and the imagery it projects---Very Well Written!
    Best of luck in the contest!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 19, 2008

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    oh this is so beautifully written the heart elt emotions that speak so much and just add such a depth to this piece. you are an amazing and caring person grandpa


  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 19, 2008

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    Wow,

    You bared so much heart-felt emotions in this piece my dear brother, thanks for sharing, and you talent truly shines with each write you pen from within. Peace, brother Timothy

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