Green words on the black-soil-screen brought me to you
Did you see my potential to bloom?
You took me as I was and you made me grow for you
I changed so much since then
Thanks to you
Your little green girl has become a new thing
I'm blooming just for you, my heart has wings
You always know just what sweet words to say
To let your Rose know that you're here to stay
We laid on the beach in the starlight dreaming out loud
Is it true we're here at last?
The points of light up in the sky cheer us on like a crowd
I've become so happy since before then
Thanks to you
Your little green girl has become a new thing
I'm blooming just for you, my heart has wings
You always know just what sweet words to say
To let your Rose know that you're here to stay
Hold me in your heart, I'll drop all my thorns
You promised you won't hurt me, love is born
Your little red rose has become a new thing
Blooming to an angel with silver wings
You knew exactly what you could say
Your love for me will forever stay
Author notes
Committed love
A contest entry
- Types Of Love(NEED TYPE 1 BEFORE JUDGING) by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended March 31, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Hope you enjoyed my insanity :)
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Thanks for including the type as my rules say. i love this poem, especially here:
Green words on the black-soil-screen brought me to you
Did you see my potential to bloom?
You took me as I was and you made me grow for you
I changed so much since then
Thanks to you
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Thanks
Yeah, my computer is irritatingly slow, so it took me a bit to add the type. Sorry! ^_^
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Thanks for the entry, you have 5 minutes to include the phase of love, it is in my rules and is very important in my judging.If you are confused see my contest page.
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