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Her Memory

She was always there,
waiting at the bottom
of that damn glass.
Usually after about
seven or eight drinks
she would fade to
almost invisible.
But tonight she
would not go away.
Her memory refused
even to dim.
Should he reach
the bottle's end
with no relief,
option "B",
the forty five caliber snub nose
will let him rest in peace.

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  • Ithica silver member
    April 1, 2008
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    Tight write... sad but extremely real!!!


  • Whisper Mckee
    March 19, 2008
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    I never thought of the picture this way, but I like the idea. Good luck.