its hard to hear.
hear of another.
another woman you want to care for.
im sitting here pondering.
pondering thoughts.
thoughts of why i am nothing more then a friend.
you state.
you say you love.
love me.
then you go and sleep with someone.
i understand now.
understood what you mean by love.
that you love me.
you love me but not in love with me.
its ok.
okay stop sending the wrong signals.
not fair.
unfair.
tough.
hard.
unbearable.
to speak.
to you.
to speak of you.
to another.
and they wonder.
how much of a fool i am in love.
you dont see that.
no you wouldnt.
you see what you want to see and not whats in front of you.
i love you.
believable.
no.
truth.
yes.
truth of what i feel.
feel for you.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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kewlness
This was AMAZING!!! I liked the one liners in this, it was a very precise way to get wha tyou were saying out. I also like the repeated words going from one line to another, this made your feelings come even more. It had great flow and rhtyhm. Great write and Great job!!! -
Very Strong
A feeling a lot of people get and I have gone thru the same thing. One sided Love is horrible bcz Some people will pity you (I.E "I don't want to hurt your feelings but..." ) or use you until a better "offer" comes about.
I liked the line "You see want you want to see, not whats in front of you" bcz it can be interpreted in many ways, making you ask questions like "Does he only like the dream, Does he only see you as a friend, Does the clueless berk not know you love him as much as you do" It can put so many twists on it depending on whos reading it. For me reading it, having experianced it, I'm under the impression its "Seeing you as only a friend" bcz thats basically what you are to them.
Very interesting read, you got me waffling about it
Great work hun, I feel for you x
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