Powers of light, aid my fight,
Opposing forces feel my might.
With my will I fuel this shield,
No harm to those within my field.
Enemies fall, I reject.
Within my wall I protect.
Encircling arms, spirit soar,
Grant me power to endure.
© copyrighted property of T.J.S
Author notes
Shadedgrey- Short but sweet, pretty self explanitory this time folks.
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A contest entry
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600 points, ended March 21, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Very empowering! I like it! Thank-you for taking the time to enter my contest... also good luck!
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short but to the point, power came from the page, luck in my contest.
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Excelent!
You have reached excelence with this one ... bravo! Bravo!
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~ James ~
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Lovely! Just what I was asking for...thank you for entering! Debbie
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sounds like a prayer of a warrior (more of a prayer than spell or anything) i like it...very well written...keep up the good writing!
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Well-written, flows well, each line leading to the next. The tone was powerful and direct, and I loved the rhyme you've put in. thanks for entering my contest. Shya
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your wording is fantastic! the rhyme, too, flows so perfectly within the poem! its got a lot of meaning and your word choice is just fabulous! wonderful write, dear! keep up the great work!
rizzie -
Beautiful
I love the imagery and wording here!
"Powers of light, aid my fight,
Opposing forces feel my might."
-- I can totally relate
I know the feeling of negative meeting positive - a bit of an oddity 
Nice write overall, I liked it!
AMber
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wow!
a very beautiful poem! i like the words you've used... they are very good! brilliant write!
keep penning!
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Great poem, I really enjoyed the read, you have done a great job, blessings John
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A warrior's poem and prayer
You asked to be in the protection of the Spirit. A heartfelt prayer is always answered.
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This is a nice write my friend and congratulations on all the trophies you have there. Niaish for sharing it with us here.
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shadedgrey
Excellent Write Dear congratulations on all the trophies. Excellent flow and rhyme to niaish for sharing this with us
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Brilliant, I need say no more.
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OUT STANDING
Spoken like a true WARRIOR...an honor to read! not afraid to fight, protects those within his domain,spirits soars and yet humble enough to ask for help from the one who matters most...Niaish so much for sharing your words with me and foe entering...
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I like the flow of this poem. I like the last few lines where it says,
"Enemies fall, I reject.
within my wall I protect.
Encircling arms, spirit soar,
Grant me power to endure."
It's a good poem
Thanks for your entry.
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Awesome
This was really good. Thank you for sharing it with me. :]
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brilliant
great use of vocabulary, beautiful work, good luck and thanks -
it's a pretty piece, AND it's uplifting and does harm anyone else. i happily read it after your other, darker works.
my favorite lines:
"With my will I fuil this shield,
No harm to those within my field."
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intense and amazing. I love this poem and nice copyright notice.
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Well Done,
I like the short and sweet ones,
I guess my brain understands them most. LOL.
Thanks for sharing, Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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