in frozen stillness
with single rose
of love in hand;
memorialized
thoughts
sheltering
darkness
evermore
Author notes
PROMPT:
contest picture
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Stardust-luvr
15 words of wonder
A contest entry
- 15/15/20 Quickie by Nighttime angel.
500 points, ended March 18, 2008, 14 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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That is a great take on the picture. Beautiful write, thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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just to heart
lovely
and beautifully woven with wonderful words
it is just flew to my heart zones -
15 words of amazing
Wow. Richly described and the emotion is razor-sharp. I like this, alot. Finely crafted
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This is a great penning indeed.
Splendid wording and flow
You did an awesome job
Tony
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Very beautifully written off the prompt!! So much sadness that hits straight through to the heart!
I wish you all the best in the contest!
Linda
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Describes the picture fully and clearly
Nice take on the prompt
Good luck! -
this is an outstanding poem. your take on the prompt is amazing. I reread this several times and I really loved the last 5 lines.
good luck
kat
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Oh My!!
Powerful images You have brought forth through Your words
Especially having to pen in 15Words
Amazing!!
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Wonderfully penned take on the prompt my friend. I find this writ to be touching and relates to the all of us. Much like life that we guard and ponder, so do we death. Yet, as long as we continue to breathe, we cling on to each moment. A gift that is as simple beauty as a flower, reflects the desire to exist and become. Fragility of the rose is as intriguing as its thorns... an oxymoron? I think so. But so is the existence of life and death. I have enjoyed this read and wish you the best in the comp
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Well done my friend, love your take on the prompt....good luck
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Those last three words are stellar. Well done. ~Pamela
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