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The Pain of Alzheimers

Today my grandchildren
Came in to see me.
I hadn't seen them in a year
And I'm so glad I had the privilege.

They brought me some cookies,
My favorite--white chocolate.
We sat and talked about old times,
And how they are doing in school.

I don't like the food here
At this lonely nursing home.
Oh wait, look, some cookies!
I wonder how they got here.

I guess I'll just sit here
And wait, eating my snacks
Until my grandchildren arrive.
I haven't seen them for a year!


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  • CountryCousin
    March 20, 2008

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    Yes.

    They seem to get stuck in the gear that has a favorable memory. Most Alzheimers patients do ramble on and say their children don't come to see them. That is often repeated over and over again.


  • Suicide Hotline
    March 18, 2008
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    Sad.... I would never want my grandma to be put in a home. I love her to death!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 18, 2008

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    sad

    Such a sad piece of reality, so well expressed!
    I wish you all the best in this contest! Much love and light, Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~