Everything froze
but the rose and I
does this mean
that passion still lives.
I search my
rural blizard mind
to comprehend
why you left
me a flower
and took yourself...
The warmth is fading
from my hands and toes
Can't feel my heart
nor your rose.
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Artwork by :: paroxysm
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A contest entry
- Ode to a dying star [still contemplation] by Naridill.
1800 points, ended April 8, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I really liked the questioning and feeling
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It sounds romantic
A poem about a lost love perhaps. I really like it.
Del
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The numbness creeps in unnoticed at times and the heart wonders how did I get in this state.
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Love, C
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Wow,
Short verses, but within each line packs lots of imagery!
Thanks for sharing, and all the best within the contest!
Peace, Timothy
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