Jeff is known for love of rhyming
Amera loves repeating forms
Listen for poetic timing
Now shelter from the sonnet storms
Amera loves repeating forms
Every word does double duty
She sees that it always performs
To give her poetry beauty
Listen for poetic timing
It brings the beauty to the verse
In the words there is a chiming
All awkwardness will sound perverse
Now shelter from the sonnet storms
That I shall set loose soon enough
When everyone their spirit warms
About my poetry and stuff
Author notes
A retourne for Amera.
In a list
Comments
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Ha ha ha. Good form, nice rhyme.
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I love it and you are most likely the only poet to pen their first Retourne in rhyme. Well done, I realize these forms seem easy to you but they will help you ro develope your "poetic voice". You also did a great job with the meter as you kept each line at 8 syllables. Do me a favor? Next challenge; don't write about me! LOL
Love,
Amera♥
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