Making my heart jump,
and chills run down my spine,
There he is.
As I sit on the other side of the room,
He smiles,
One of those breath taking smiles.
I can now feel my face turn red,
I look away fast.
I'm scared- Did he see me?
Could it be those smiles,
I only see now when he is with her
What is it that makes me fall
head over heels for that boy,
Who is just out of my reach.
Author notes
Once again,
I found a contest I wanted to enter
so I wrote this.
A contest entry
- 1-6 letter words by garbait.
900 points, ended March 22, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - (= Prewrites!!!!! ENTER NOW!!!!!!!!! =) by xCandieKissesx.
525 points, ended May 19, 2008, 79 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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wowza. this ones real good. i felt as if i was experiencing the words. nicely written.
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Lovely. I can relate to this. I think we've all been in the same situation! Great flow and imagery! Stellar! Thanks for entering and good luck!
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A situation we've all been in. Good luck in the contest!
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This is very touching write.
I think we've all been in this spot.
Just keep reaching. -
Aww.
I think that is really cute!! wayy too go.
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