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Audiowash

A swell
A flood
      a tidal wave
Rushed over me that night

Even though I could've died
Cowering
        with cold shivers
Under Royal blankets.
I cried
In the 15 degree
                howling
                scowling
City darkness;
It's knife to my throat

But when
  Oh when
The music poured
  Through amps
            Pierced the flesh
                Picked me up
Nothing beyond the sound and dreamstate-players 
                                              mattered

And when
  yes when
Mind
  Body
    Soul
      And desperation
Arrived in perfect harmony
                The world drowned in pure ecstasy

A strike to the drum
              the thunderstorm of the century
Caress the strings
              asphalt, fall to pieces
A hand around a microphone
              voice dripping with heaven's nectar

I was there
When Hell froze over..
But you
Weren't
When the world changed.

I cried.




Author notes

To further explain: I camped out 27 hours, wind chill possibly below freezing, for a concert. It changed my life in more ways than anyone could ever understand.

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