yours is the breath that fills me
with the warmth I hungered for
through my loneliness
tender hands caressed away my doubts
as they touched my heart
with sweet abandon
I am complete within the love and
gentle companionship of
this precious gift
friendship that spans the years
Author notes
Through time and space, I know you will always be there...
In a list
A contest entry
- 10 lines of Beauty by Riftkin.
800 points, ended March 20, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Invite only for these poets and their poems by Riftkin.
800 points, ended March 21, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thi is a wonderful poem. It sounds like the love me and my husband share. absolutly wonderful. I think you should of won. It was a pleasure to read.
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This is such a beautiful write. You have a way with words. Keep up the great writing.
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such sweet words that bring beauty to the pages of AP thank you. Riftkin
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Beautiful, simply beautiful.
Love and peace,
mj.
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