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Eternity

Lets get fucked up and die
I'm not talking literally of course
Lets consume the darkness inside
By taking the course
Of destroying the unknown between us
On the outside

Lets see what happens
When we're together
We forget all that's around us
Since all that surrounds us
Is no longer there

There is no sun to bother us here
Just a dark stary night
To keep us together and close
It cheers us both up

Lets get fucked up and die
I'm not talking literally of course
Lest consume the darkness inside
By taking the course
Of destroying the unknown between us
On the outside

Lets get away from here
And run away from it all
Just you and I
If you meet me half way
We will live
Together Forever
Until we both pass away

Do it soon
As you never know
It could be the last day of your life
Or the best day of your life
The best of ours
Will be the one
That we spend lying in each others' arms
Together forever
Just you and me
That's the meaning of eternity

Lets get fucked up and die
I'm not talking literally of course
Lest consume the darkness inside
By taking the course
Of destroying the unknown between us
On the outside

It will be the day
That we spend lying in each others' arms
Together Forever
Just you and me
That's the meaning
Of Eternity

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For Brittney Ariel Brindley
(my ex)

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Comments


  • Til the Day I Die
    April 20, 2008
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    wow dude i love it. lol beast


  • acari27 gold member
    March 20, 2008
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    This is really lyrical-you should write music for this-or is it already a song you wrote?


  • fallenangel671
    March 19, 2008

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    aww, thans Dan, I loved this one too, it was beautiful and definatly one that makes me want to cry, its a beauty and I love the flow and the words itself, couldn't be more perfect I love it, Its so amazing I can read it over and over again. its beautiful and I can't stop thinking about
    "The best of ours
    Will be the one
    That we spend lying in each others' arms
    Together forever
    Just you and me
    That's the meaning of eternity"

    I love it, just amazing

    ♥♥♥♥♥♥ XOXO

    Ashley<3


  • Til the Day I Die
    March 18, 2008
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    well haha great opening...but other then that i love this bro you are an a,azing poet -smile-