As I take comfort in the blanket of night
sitting with in this room where the darkened
windows of love have taken me to the place
I fall from to the rocks below.
As I take comfort in the blanket of night
the rain pours down outside the window where
the angels cry out their pain of being left
alone to contemplate the universe.
As I take comfort in the blanket of night
the moon arises reflecting upon the lake
directly in front of me, while I huddle
beneath the blanket of pain.
As I take comfort in the blanket of night
the fireflies gently drift through the
stars of time within that blanket that
softly holds you in its blessed grip.
As I take comfort in the blanket of night
I drift down towards the eternal sleep of
the damned only to be awakened as one of
you, the vampyre.
Author notes
8) As I take comfort in the blanket of night
I did a little something different then I usually do but it seemed to fit in the poem and make little poems while tying them together. Hope you like
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This is a great poem, very well written and good imagery. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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Thank you for your entry, good use of the line given, good story line and choice of wording. Best wishes, Ken IBT
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In my perspective, this is a very well written poem, although it doesn't seem to be as dark as others may have expected! It still fits perfectly with the option that was used..Good luck sweetie..
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it was good but it tells me you r are still searching you have come along way since I met you, yet you have so much more to go. Learn to save yourself, before you can expect anyone else to help you.
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very pretty way to write a vampirish poem i did so myself but it wasnt as good as yours goodluck
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