i drank you down
now my body is on fire
i have to have more
my flesh it tingles
your juice it trickles
filling me like a heated blaze
simmering in my body
swallowing you down
taking you in like an addiction
lusting after you like a fine wine
Author notes
Lust prompt contest
A contest entry
- Quickie. by warrior-eagle.
300 points, ended March 19, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Damn.
Makes me want for a thirsty woman.
Very hot.
Good write.
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This was DEFINITELY sexy
I agree with "Fair"
And thanks for enterng my contest.
..Simply Me♥ -
Oh I like! This was super sexy and very well written. The only thing I would suggest is a TAD bit more imagery but overall it was fantastic!! Well done, love and good luck.
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