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uhm...who? #1

White hot lies glowing deep inside your eyes
Your smile fakes memories like a million masked mistakes.
This dagger you dig deep, isn't enough pain to take.
A counter-clockwise twist each time you think of hate,
pulls it out an inch when our realities relate.

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just thoughts in mathclass.

make any sense?

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  • XxshadowprincessxX
    June 25, 2008
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    wow

    either you REALY dont like math, or you've got one twisted teacher....nice poem though


    • no-way-ap
      June 25, 2008
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      hah...

      it was about somebody in my math class thanks.


  • Abominangel.
    June 2, 2008
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    i can feel the heat from here


    • no-way-ap
      June 2, 2008
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      ^^^ meant to say thanks. my most favortie poet just commented on my poems. you just basically made my day.

    • no-way-ap
      June 2, 2008
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      aha wow.

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