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Thespian Theatrics

 

 

the eloquence of transfered gestures,
words spun by stitched lips

[that cannot utter a whimper
yet explain everything]
with their painted expressions.

the results of ruined cords
that used to play the prettiest tunes;
like the pluck of fingers
on a broken guitar.
[that shed its splintered self
on the frayed edges of carpets.]

she traced
the forgotten grains of wood
with her severed idioms
and let reactions reverberate,
to be caught
by personal perceptions.

[her eyes tell it all
and her hands assist.]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Friday gold member
    April 28

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    Ok so I know I haven't read your stuff in a while, and I'm sorry. But I think I'm going to have to go back and read it all, because this is just amazingly brilliant.
    You always write with so much of everything it's hard not to get drawn into your work.

  • this is really good the imagery is really good and the words flow like liqued
  • Very well imagery, Im a honor thespian as well.

  • Naridill gold member
    April 8
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    Moments gasp imagery through.


  • cfh1167
    March 21

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    Wow, it does seem to be explaining something that is rather more a tragedy when I think about it. People look to much into the meaning of poems when its usually underneath their noses but you put this together beautifully. <3 Keep up the good work.


  • And Hyetal silver member
    March 19

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    What can I say? You've made me speechless again!

    You voice-stealer, you!

    loved it.

    ~Cassie


  • Cerulean gold member
    March 18
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    You make mimes look good. heh

    It's awesome.


  • CaptainRedd
    March 18

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    Cool stuff. I enjoyed reading this, it was out of the ordinary. I have a question though: what does "Thespian" mean? Big words that not everyone knows of are always things that excite me.

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