It was midnight…
Thoughts of you were stirring.
Listening closely,
I hear the sudden rush of your wind
Traveling within the perilous passages
Between my world of dreams
And your reality.
You don’t know
What you do to me…
When you lay your magic touch
Upon my skin;
Sending shockwaves surging;
Pulsating through the darkness within me.
Deep within this realm,
I find your fragrant songs
Singing uncontrollable tunes.
It is then,
I realize…
We are bathed in the light of love’s passion.
Two endless stars traveling across a blacken sky.
Soon each will be enlightened by the wisdom of the ages,
Sensing the moment is right,
Cutting through the stillness,
Calling out in love’s flaming harmony.
What could be more fascinating,
More radiant,
Than the untamed beauty and natural power of love
Colliding in a sparkling brilliance
As two souls touch?
Roaming this vast wilderness,
We never lose our way
As love’s passionate storm approaches.
Guided by instinct,
We follow a preordained path
With determination and purpose.
We celebrate the dream,
The power of the human spirit
As two living souls
Come together as one.
The timeless mystery exists
Deep within the heart
Driving desire’s cunning storm
As it holds mastery over us.
A thick haze of honey dew
Hovers over the canyon’s depths
As dawn quickly approaches.
Wild heartbeats thunder across the changing landscape,
We experience the thrilling passion of motion;
Riding the swelling currents of affection high,
We race to the edge of the night.
The savory gifts of nature
Nourishes our souls from deep within.
We share the wondrous treasures joyously;
Boundlessly awarded
In the fleeting moments of nature’s glory.
Day breaks in stunning splendor,
Love’s summit is finally reached.
The embodiment of love’s liquid grace
Flows unrestrained.
Nature plays a grand symphony.
Time seems to stand still…
In the rapturous moment.
The silence is broken.
Our spirits whisper love’s heartfelt sentiments
With a kiss.
This night
We have shared the same dream,
That we would meet
The one who would forever capture our hearts
Be an eternal soul mate
In the spirit of love.
Author notes
BluRosePoet8488
A contest entry
- An In-Depth Look Into Relationships by Theactoffailing.
600 points, ended April 1, 2008, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Enter your last posted poem by whispernthedark.
425 points, ended March 22, 2008, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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That was glorious! There was so much passion in this poem. It was mind blowing. Everything fits perfectly and I don't know one person that could describe THAT moment as beautifully and perfect as you have. This is brilliant!!
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Thank you. I don't usually write stuff like this, but when I do, I want it to be special, not just your run of the mill vo dee dodo. That moment should be special. Thanks again for reaing, commenting and applauding. I appreciate it.
~Donna~
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This is a very passionate write, very beautiful. Wonderful poem, thank you for entering my contest. Best of luck (and in the other one, too, this is great).
♥
whisper
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Whisper,
Thank you. I am glad that you liked the poem. I try to make each write special. This is definitely special. Thanks again. Love ad hugs...
~Donna~
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ah love, it twists us on its palm and all we can ever do is scream in pleasure and pain, a good piece of poetry.
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Thank you for stopping by to read, comment and applaud. I appreciate it! I am glad that you found it tasteful. Thanks again.
~Donna~
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Firstly, unbelievable vocabulary. It seemed at first slightly morbid, but it turned into just passion. And you did it so tastefully, it took me a stanza or two to realize exactly how sexual this piece is. You used nature to explain the details, very creative. It's true it was not exactly what I was looking for, but there is no way I'm DQing this. You have incredible talent. Not too complicated to infer, yet not so simple as to hint at perversion, you really did an incredible job. Thank you for entering.
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Thank you. I am glad that you are giving it respect by not DQing it. In the back of my mind, I figured this was not what you were looking for, but I took a chance anyway. Thank you, once again, for reading, commenting and applauding this. I appreciate it.
~Donna~
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The embodiment of love's liquid grace
flows
day breaks
into a grand symphony
I somehow felt this as the final act of passion
ending into love after the desires are emptied
from the bodies onto sou -
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You seem to have skipped a word there, 'unrestrained'. Flows unrestrained...
It was the moment that had been built up to... the moment when the depth of loves overflows the body. Thanks for reading and commenting.
~Donna~
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