What's it like to feel
Falling while standing still?
Excitement building.
Limbs flailing,
Then slowly going numb.
I wonder,
How the ground will feel,
After I've been falling for so long.
Author notes
"Every time we talk, I fall a little harder"
5: prompt: i'm falling in deeper than i've ever been.
Rayne 4 EVR
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wow.
short but expressive. i love the emotion you poured into this. -
So much emotion in such a small write. Very good take on the quote. Well done and thank you for the great entry. xo
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well...
i really like the last 3 lines, but the rest is... interesting? eh, its good.
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very good poem...erupting straight from the heart. keep writing....thank you
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good
like i said at school earlier
still has a rythem issue
But its still good -
awesome
truly written from the heart, it really conveys what you wanted. and welcome to AP. hope to read more poems by you.
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