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The pages unfold

The pages unfold
The passage is open
The wonders to behold
For all who have chosen

The sheets fly by
Taking you there
To where some may die
But all is fair

Between the covers
Before the end
Because there are lovers
You will help defend

Take hold
The old and the new
The pages refold
Take home a few

Author notes

Option #4; I choose this because it is awesome!!! I LOVE BOOKS (and enjoy reading them to ) I have almost a thousand of them, all of which I have read. Always open to anything someone recommeds.

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  • Nam
    June 7, 2008

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    I don't think that "So" is really needed in the last line, it works, I just don't feel it's really needed.

    A nicely rhymed poem that you have written here.

    -Nam


  • l33tm4n
    April 22, 2008
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    w00t


  • l33tm4n
    April 22, 2008

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    BOOKS, BOOKS, BOOKS AND MORE BOOKS!!!!! Each |300|< iz a new world in which you loose yourself. This is (_)B32 l33t /\/\@|\|!!! Hope to read more of your stuff in the future.

    -l33tm4n


  • ixtli
    March 20, 2008
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    I love books so much! And I really like this poem too! It really depicts the journey that each book has to offer to the readery. I can tell that you really appreciate books and the words in them. good luck and thanks for entering!

  • mmook
    March 18, 2008
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    nice done.. i thought is very good and imagery was by far awesome.. as if i turn the pages in a book could wait to get last page to see the ending and read over and over again... thanks for sharing.

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