Shadows of my mind
as I give into your
delightful passion.
Sildeshows of desires
while you press play
to see me
Undress
my cotton candy
drenched in
Kiwi..
Strawberry
slippery, liquor
evaborates in your
taste buds,
crawling fingertips,
late night...nips,
of quality time and
airbrushed arousals.
As I blow you
in wet chocolate
hershey's kisses
ending tonight's fire
with a simple rose
across my bed sheets;
and I continue dreaming...
of You.
Author notes
I'm hungry.
In a list
A contest entry
- 100 th GROUP CONTEST; by Dove by Partners In Crime.
900 points, ended April 12, 2008, 126 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
The art/images used with my work I claim not as my own, and give FULL credit to the artists that inspired what you read from me. Used for entertainment purposes only, as my Poetry is Real. Thank You
Comments
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oooo yummmmyyy I think I am hungry now as well after reading this piece
hot steamy and delicious
What a very hot and erotic dream to keep dreaming over and over..
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Thanks Kari
so sorry for the delayed response.
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This is a dream that needs to come true. lol like in MY LIFE TIME! lmao... Love the images I got and the wording is grand and sweet. Excellent poem
Thanks
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Thank you
I appreciate your comments on this again 
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Geez Louise Woman!!
This is hot!!! I wanna take a trip to New Orleans now!!!
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LOL
don't let me stop you
I say...make that trip!
Thanks gurl
Piff
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Hot Damn!
You make me want to fuck! Help help help!
Lady E. this was some sensually hot shit
right hear. Damn boo, why you done unleashed
my nature? Can a brother get a slice?
A taste? A sop with a bisquit? Mmmm!
Lovely darlin, just lovely
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LOL
you so crazy a sop with a biscuit, 
thank you, sweetheart...
E
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DAMN! sis I am hungry to now. You at your best as always. Got me in the mood for some munchies not saying what kind Lets just say I'm feeling naughty Love ~sugarcookie~
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teehee
sis, I feel you it's all good.
Thank you for the comment.
E
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it is all good sis. You're welcome.
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try that cherry blossom next time He can't resist.lol good write sis
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LOL
girl u a mess Thanks.
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What a beautiful dream, my love...hot, sexy, charming,lustful, sweet as chocolate, refreshing as strawberries!...
It would be really something watching you undress...Wish it could be possible...
and then I'd have dreamt about you...every night!
Kisses my dear...all over!
Galaxy2
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Thank you
so glad you enjoyed this.
I really do appreciate you.
Always,
Ephiphany
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big sis i just love your sight in this here writting game damn you are one of the best and my favorite
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Thanks lil sis
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Naughty, naughty
You said you didn't do this anymore. (just kiddin!) An erotic poem with a nice tone and visual imagery. Good to see some more of your work. Have a good day, Ephiphany.
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LOL
I don't write as much, actually this is my firest Erotic piece since last year. Going in another direction, I just loved this art so, I had to write something.
Very lovely image. Thank you for reading.
E
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hell i am to
you feed me a tease you just being forbidden o my (( clinch )) chest
's for the lady
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Totally Hot read of desires and passion, you have asmazed me once again
thanks for sharing such a beautiful piece....Love ya!....G'momma
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Thanks Godmother novy
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Oh my, Sis. It's getting hot in here.
That chocolate hershey kisses part brought a lot of passion to the poem. Keep that pen flowing.
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lol, thanks lil sis.
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Wow! I see there's yet another side of you! I like it! No, I love it! those wet chocolate kisses melt on the fire putting it out. in the process sensual steam is created which will rise to the heavens. chemistry creates clouds that will overflow with showers of chocolate passion.... I love this. Keep it up!
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Thanks moluv
I appreciate all you do in commenting on my work.
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Well this was tasty! Loved it sis! Hot and sweet!
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Thanks sis
I appreciate you
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Fantastic Writing
That was one hell of a piece of writing there. Amazing stuff. Such sensuality within this piece. Superb imagery too. You really are a master wordsmith. Fantastic writing Piff.
Love
Wayne Leon
xx
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Thank you Wayne
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