He looked at me funny as I did the same.
Voicing his complaint about his sore butt,
Not realizing that for me I couldn't hear.
I looked at the predicamint that we shared.
Laughing I pointing my ears were gone too,
We stood there deciding what we must do.
He stood there quietly wondering what to do.
Glancing from his end and my lack of ears,
We came to a decision we now were a delicacy.
Gathering us up, the child began our demise.
Author notes
I really enjoyed this prompt
A contest entry
- Picture Quickie by Starz of Heaven.
475 points, ended March 18, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Happy Moments by Good Mourning Moon.
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Comments
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mysterious and odd, but i totally dig it... what are the ears that missing? why is his butt soar?
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Very Funny and a great take on the prompt--Congratulations on the HM
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Love your humour congrats on the HW
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Haha this made me smile thank you for taking the time to enter my contest have a great evening best wishes and much luck
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