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Thinking of him [he really did care]

Never understood why he even cared
Never got the reason behind the I love you’s
Maybe it was just a dream fake and not real
Maybe my cries made him feel!
I was insecure that he did know
But still he stood I never understand
Why did he even care, he stayed there
When I felt alone when I wanted to leave
He held me and took it all in
He never once yelled for me causing him such pain
He never once said there was nothing to gain.
Even after I left him alone in the cold
Still he said he loved me, he cares
I don’t know and I don’t understand
Always wondering when I am chillen with the guys
What it is I do. I never once told you
Till finally I slipped and he went another way
Still there is the memories and song
That  holds what use to be. He really did love me

Author notes

So i was just thinking about my ex and then i started remember our song, and i lisened to it and then this just came so i got the idea of the song that he he said was our song and it was pretty much true.

the song was "pins and needles by billy talent"

it is a great song i love it

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  • broken-princess
    March 19, 2008

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    You did great with this one vanna, i love that song by the way was jenoro the one who said this was your song? just wondering nice work.


  • Atrophya
    March 18, 2008
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    this is perfect, I love it =]

    you're a genius darling =]

    Rain--x