The cuts I have made are deep
I watch the blood as it begins to seep
Instantly my thoughts become clear
It only hurts when you are near
One cut, two cut, three cut, four
I watch the blood as it drips to the floor
It's the only thing that makes me feel
It's all I have that is real
I'm sick of cutting out the pain
Watching the blood is driving me insane
Yet here it comes drip, drip, drip
It's like my flesh was made to rip
I thought the cuts would set me free
Help me be the person I used to be
But that girl is no where to be found
Chances are she won't be back around
Author notes
Option two...
A contest entry
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Comments
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I liked this.
it was good. 
WOW! keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!
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nice imagery,
excellent rhyme.
thanks for taking the time to enter,
good luck -
OmG..
I LoVe ThIs PoEm..
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this was gorgeous.
I love the imagery it held me the second I started reading...great job and keep writing -
that was epic.
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Wow... that's really good! This show pain so clearly and the rhyme was great! Could you put the option in your notes though? It was a rule...
Best of luck in the contest! -
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option up
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yay!
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great write here... thank you for sharing this with us from your heart.... good luck in contest.... hugs...!!
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I'm sick of cutting out the pain
Watching the blood is driving me insane
Yet here it comes drip, drip, drip
It's like my flesh was made to rip
I thought the cuts would set me free
Help me be the person I used to be
But that girl is no where to be found
Chances are she won't be back around
i enjoyed reading this..these lines really caught my eye.keep writing and good luck! -
Ahhh yes, the realisation hits hard and hurts like hell too... Love and it's best amigos friendship and trust are a very scary trio.
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awesome.. a really good write. I particularly like the rhyme and the lines: One cut, two cut, three cut, four
I watch the blood as it drips to the floor -
exactly
exactly the pain i was looking for. well rhymed . very nice
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Cutting is a really bad addiction!! U percieved the feelings so perfectly!! Great Write!
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Sad but true addiction for many, and you have captured the feeling here. Your won't is missing the '. Thanks for entering.
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Thanks for letting me know!
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