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The Season

during the time
the flowers show
and the ground is wet
there are
songbirdssinging their
own specialsong
they perch and sing their
chirps and squawks
this spring will be full of
kids playinginthepark
and people with their
newfoundlove will
walk handinhand and flaunt
what they feel
all whle stening to the
specialsong full of
chirps and squawks
just by the mood
you can tell
it’s spring
the green and yellow
with some
pink
and
red
all surrounded by
a special song of
chirps
and
squawks

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  • iamlost gold member
    April 15, 2008

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    I love the overall theme in this, with the happy spring birds and the park. Makes me very sad that it snowed today where I am. I want this spring that you have so beautifully created in this poem!