enjoyment and happiness
are found
with entertainment and
longing
to know more and
continue
desire and impatience
come suddenly
and these feelings don’t leave
until
you turn the
Page
A contest entry
- Tempt My Heart - PW by Melissa Burns.
600 points, ended March 22, 2008, 23 entries
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Comments
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Often I kinda relate to life as a book.. waiting for my next chapter.. I imagine at least at this point its the part of the story where you feel bad for the heartbroken starlet waiting to have everything mended.. which yes has absolutely nothing to do with your poem... lol but I promise you I do have a point... Your ending "you turn the page" it reminded me of that... Life can be impatient, entertaining, emotional.. You've seemed to capture that to me in this.. You've done great with it. and Thank You for sharing
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I love this poem. It's so heartfelt and well penned. Overall I can see the emotion painted out very well in words. I wonder though why you capitilized page, itts the only word in the poem that is capitilized. Just curous.
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That was the most important word... in my opinion...
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Thank You for entering your poem into my humble little contest
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