I write for her now we’re a pair
The simple truth is that I care
It doesn’t mater that you stare
She is not there, she is not there
At times I look into the sky
Never a teardrop in my eye
Many lows and seldom high
I never cry, I never cry
Know she is somewhere in the night
Know through life I will always fight
I know she'll never know my plight
She is my light, she is my light
Author notes
Well I tried...lol
A contest entry
- Monotetra Form by Aussie Gypsy.
1100 points, ended March 31, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Whatever you like...
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we all need a reason to go on. This is wonderfully written, thanks for sharing. Also its a new form of poetry I've not tried, so thanks for some inspiration also
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This is such a sad story... Lots of emotion in there... I loved it!!!
(you may just want to take another look at the first two lines of the last stanza.. 9 syllables instead of 8)
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Thans jacks...
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This is one of my fav format simply enjoy reading it...I like the journey i took as your lines unfolded...just one small matter been sharing my keybord...2nd last line she'll unless you mean a name Shell.. but yeah a good write thank you for the pleasure...Good luck in the contest.
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My Brother,
I know what you mean. I could have said the same things, just changing a few words
I am not sure I know this form but I love it!! What a great job!
Best of luck in this contest!!
Nevermore~
Me
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Breath taking. Brought a tear to my eye
Miley -
Although I am not that familiar with the type of writing required by this contest, I did feel the emotional effort involved. I loved the flow and the message inferred. Good Luck in the contest! Niaish Ma eno from all your children.
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